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re: THIS FLAT EARTH
Last Edit: writerkev 08:47 am EDT 03/29/18
Posted by: writerkev 08:45 am EDT 03/29/18
In reply to: THIS FLAT EARTH - TheArbiter 06:00 am EDT 03/29/18

I have to say, it didn't feel truthful to me, and the whole thing felt pretty misshapen. There are some unbelievable plot manipulations, and at the end of the day the main thrust of the action--concerning "address fraud" to get a child into a (supposedly) better school, simply has little to do with anything. It seems completely unrelated to the whole premise of a girl in the aftermath of a tragedy. And the title metaphor is tacked on without any relevance.

There is one beautiful passage at the end, delivered by Lynda Gravatt as an upstairs neighbor. That was the only moment I was truly engaged.
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re: THIS FLAT EARTH
Posted by: twocents 01:10 pm EDT 03/30/18
In reply to: re: THIS FLAT EARTH - writerkev 08:45 am EDT 03/29/18

end, delivered by Lynda Gravatt as an upstairs neighbor.
-And that went on foreeeever. Too long by half. The kids injected a lot of fun energy and zip. The address fraud issue was justified on Beck's part. Get the hell off the property. Of course it had nothing to do with the larger crisis!
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