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| re: What’s wrong with “I feel pretty”? | |
| Posted by: Chromolume 08:32 pm EST 02/22/20 | |
| In reply to: re: What’s wrong with “I feel pretty”? - Michael_Portantiere 08:07 pm EST 02/22/20 | |
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| Except, when you look at the entire lyric - verse and refrain - it's full of alliterations and inner rhymes. Lots of both. Along with words like "dither" and "protestations" which also don't feel like everyday vocabulary. |
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| re: What’s wrong with “I feel pretty”? | |
| Posted by: Michael_Portantiere 06:12 pm EST 02/23/20 | |
| In reply to: re: What’s wrong with “I feel pretty”? - Chromolume 08:32 pm EST 02/22/20 | |
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| Right, but again, it's the combination of stilted language and alliteration AND interior rhyming IN ONE LINE that makes me think "I'm bromidic and bright as a moon-happy night pouring light on the dew" sounds so obviously "written." "Dither" doesn't strike me as high-flown language at all, and "protestations" only slightly. |
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| re: What’s wrong with “I feel pretty”? | |
| Posted by: Chromolume 10:39 pm EST 02/23/20 | |
| In reply to: re: What’s wrong with “I feel pretty”? - Michael_Portantiere 06:12 pm EST 02/23/20 | |
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| One other point to consider in context - the other nurses are listening in, and Nellie knows it. The vocab could be part of a deliberate bit of showing off. | |
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