| re: What’s wrong with “I feel pretty”? |
| Posted by: Michael_Portantiere 06:12 pm EST 02/23/20 |
| In reply to: re: What’s wrong with “I feel pretty”? - Chromolume 08:32 pm EST 02/22/20 |
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Right, but again, it's the combination of stilted language and alliteration AND interior rhyming IN ONE LINE that makes me think "I'm bromidic and bright as a moon-happy night pouring light on the dew" sounds so obviously "written."
"Dither" doesn't strike me as high-flown language at all, and "protestations" only slightly. |
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