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re: Paradise Square: talk about second act trouble... (spoilers)
Last Edit: Delvino 09:39 pm EDT 05/17/22
Posted by: Delvino 09:39 pm EDT 05/17/22
In reply to: re: Paradise Square: talk about second act trouble... (spoilers) - OldTheaterGuy 06:09 pm EDT 05/17/22

The fact that you must explain that plot point to so many of us, arguably, is a significant problem in the storytelling. Particularly concerning the dance competition, which overtakes the second act without sufficient audience investment.
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