It will be trickier, I think, to come up with equivalents for "to wear my hair unfastened 'til it billows to the floor" (when did men ever do that?) and "to be the kind of girl designed to be kissed upon the eyes."
Can't a boy also be designed to be kissed upon the eyes?
And gee, wasn't long hair for men becoming a thing during the 60's, even?? Maybe not necessarily billowing to the floor, but there's a whole sing in "Hair" about the subject lol.