| re: COST OF LIVING ... what am I missing? |
| Posted by: student_rush 01:55 pm EDT 11/05/22 |
| In reply to: re: COST OF LIVING ... what am I missing? - Ann 01:51 pm EDT 11/05/22 |
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| Exactly -- because the other two stories were completely separate, how does it make sense that these two characters would meet? It's purely coincidence that she sleeps near/outside his Bayonne apartment, which was a bridge too far for my suspension of disbelief. I feel like there are much more interesting and clever ways to have the two caregivers intersect than "I am randomly outside your apartment." |
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