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re: But what about ...?
Posted by: AlanScott 05:19 am EST 12/11/22
In reply to: re: But what about ...? - Chromolume 10:55 pm EST 12/10/22

Yes, "of course" can be justified, and this is what actors do. But I still think it's filling a phrase and giving him a rhyme, like that rhyming fortune-teller with a nightclub act he once or twice spoke about, whom people used to find impressive, but he realized her rhymes were often little added phrases like "you know."

I find little imperfections here and there in Sondheim. Somewhere I have a list. Ain't nobody perfect.

He used to bitch about lyricists of previous generations using backward syntax, but then there is "That I'd prefer" in "Our Little World," and I think at least one or two other examples. Truth is that in real life people sometimes use backward syntax.

Anyway, lyric writing is tough.
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